I've Got It! I've Got It! I've Got It!

[queenoftheskies]

No, it's not contagious, so don't worry.

It's the new opening for Wildfire. It needs editing, but I've finally got something I think I can like...and I'm very picky. But, at least I'm on the right track now and have a flow and some word choices that I can live with.

(If I say I'm pleased with it, I know there are people who will swoop down and burst my happy bubble and tell me if I like it I need to cut it (cause it's happened before)...but, when I like something, it means that I don't hate it and that I'm pleased with the way it fits into the work as a whole and that it's rough, but I think it can be polished into something nice. Not that I'm in love with myself as a writer and that I think I've written golden words. So, please don't burst my happy bubble cause, as a whole, I haven't been a very confident writer lately and I deserve this little moment of satisfaction. Thank you.)

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And, wow, I managed to repeat myself in the first two lines. This is why I should look at comments before I click send.