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queenoftheskiesYes!
I got the second set of feedback on my screenplay, Gateway to Eternity.
I'd reworked part of the ending to incorporate some new ideas I had after I'd sent it off the first time for feedback, and THEY WORKED for the screenwriter reviewing the script.
Hooray! Hooray! Hooray!
This is the best feedback I've gotten so far and I'm THRILLED!
He made a few suggestions for streamlining the screenplay since it's very dense and action-packed, but told me not to delete anything of value, only to see if I spotted anything that wouldn't affect the story if removed.
He told me I should be proud of my work.
I know I still have lots to learn about writing and will always have lots to learn about writing, but it helps to know I'm on the right track and that not all the words I fling at paper/computer screen are crap.
I got the second set of feedback on my screenplay, Gateway to Eternity.
I'd reworked part of the ending to incorporate some new ideas I had after I'd sent it off the first time for feedback, and THEY WORKED for the screenwriter reviewing the script.
Hooray! Hooray! Hooray!
This is the best feedback I've gotten so far and I'm THRILLED!
He made a few suggestions for streamlining the screenplay since it's very dense and action-packed, but told me not to delete anything of value, only to see if I spotted anything that wouldn't affect the story if removed.
He told me I should be proud of my work.
I know I still have lots to learn about writing and will always have lots to learn about writing, but it helps to know I'm on the right track and that not all the words I fling at paper/computer screen are crap.
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